Esther Sylvester

Hey Squirrely! Really good job here! This was great. I simply cannot wait for more. Unfortunately, everything that has needed to be said has already been said. But I'm going ...

Hi! This is Esther Sylvester here for a review! First off This was very good! You captured the main character's frustrations wonderfully. She is different than the average "heroine", and ...

Hey Shubhi! Here to review as requested. Now, here is the question: Is this a persuasive essay for the magazine or just an article? Just asking so I can judge ...

Hey Skins! Wow, this chapter wasn't off at all! In fact, it was my favorite one yet! It didn't feel to rushed but it had just the right pacing. I ...

This was really, really cute! Childish, I admit, but cute nonetheless. Since this is a short story, I won't be assuming the normal way I review. However, I will be ...

Hello Maddie! Here's Esther as requested. First off I loved this! Although it was simply written, it was written very, very well. I think anyone from 8 to 21 could ...

Hi there! Sorry it took me so long to review, First off Impressive. This was enjoyable and easy to read, so good job! There are a few issues which I ...

Hey there! This is still good, but you have gone off the track of good ole reality again. The story focuses on a very realistic issue, but the character's reactions ...

Hey Ikafe! Here is the review as I promised! First off This is okay so far. I don't know what the characters are like yet, but I really want to ...

Hey Ikafe. First off I suppose you captured my attention, but there were too many things left unanswered to make this chapter really enjoyable. As mentioned before, this story is ...

Hey there! Esther Sylvester here to review. I will be reviewing this story as well as the fifth chapter. Here I go! First off Mmkay, this kept my attention all ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS! Esther Sylvester here for a review! First off: I would like to say this is pretty good. I didn't know what was going on, but ...

This is great! The writing style is very unique and intriguing. You left me wondering what would happen next. There isn't really anything that needs nitpicking, but I would have ...

Hey there eab10! This is Esther Sylvester, here for a review. (thank you for the welcome, by the way) This was quite a cute story. You don't read many stories ...

Hey there! You did a very good job. You seem to have a very good idea of who the characters are and what they behave like. Here are some things ...